Friday, August 29, 2014

Reading Analysis Guide 1

Guidelines for Reading Analysis Presentations 1 & 2
Sign-up for one reading during Weeks 3 or 4 and one reading during Weeks 5, 6 or 7. Make a note of the article titles and presentation dates that you sign up for below.
Reading analysis 1 article: __________________________  Presentation date: _______________
Reading analysis 2 article: __________________________  Presentation date: _______________
You will be presenting your analysis in class along with two to five of your classmates. The class will be counting on you to be on top of the article you are covering, so please be prepared!
This assignment is worth 30 points – to receive credit, you must participate in the presentation of your analysis. You will be graded primarily on your written analysis (breakdown of scoring below), but outstanding presentations will be rewarded.
Before you begin your work, examine the Evaluating Arguments handout.
Read the article you will be analyzing carefully. If possible, read it twice. On your first reading, just try to identify the main idea(s) and get a feel for the writer’s approach and the flow of the piece. On your second reading, go over the text more carefully; notice how the writer constructs his or her argument. You will probably want to mark up your text and/or take notes.
To prepare your written analysis:
Identify the author’s name and the title of the article. Answer the following questions. Put your answers in outline form (see sample analysis on the reverse side of this sheet).
1.     What is the central claim (or thesis) of the selection? Your answer should be a complete sentence in your own words (not a quote!). Be as specific as possible, but remember that your claim should cover the whole article. (10 points)
2.     Is the central claim expressed explicitly or implicitly? The claim is explicit if the writer spells out what it is. The claim is implicit if the writer only implies the claim but does not state it outright. (1 point)
3.     What reasons link the evidence to the claim? In other words, why does the evidence support the claim? Reasons may be presented explicitly or implied. (7 points)
4.     What evidence does the writer present to support his or her claim? Specify and categorize the evidence (e.g. examples, personal experiences, analogy, authoritative opinion, facts, statistical data, cause-effect reasoning, results of scientific experiments, comparison, interviews, etc. – see sample on back). Do not answer this question with detailed quotes or paraphrases from the article! For additional guidance, see the table of Kinds of Evidence on pp. 91-4 of your textbook Writing Arguments. (7 points)
5.     Comment briefly on the persuasiveness of the article by answering one or more of the following questions.  (5 points)
·      Is the argument convincing? Does it rely on emotional, ethical, and/or logical appeals?
·      Are there flaws in the reasoning of the argument? Does it rely on questionable sources?
·      Does understanding the argument require knowledge of the historical or cultural context in which it was written?
·      How do the style, organization, and/or tone contribute or detract from the persuasiveness of the argument?
·      What is your personal reaction to the article?

SAMPLE ANALYSIS of “The Myth of ‘Practice Makes Perfect’” by Annie Murphy Paul
Central claim: Mastery of a skill demands deliberate practice, focusing on improving weak areas, rather than just spending time repeating the activity (Explicit).
Reason: Improvement at a skill only occurs when the practitioner works to notice and eliminate errors through practice.
Evidence:
  • Authoritative opinion from cognitive psychologist Gary Marcus argues that deliberate practice is much more effective than unfocused just-for-pleasure practice.
  • Marcus cites studies that show that working to improve weaknesses is more likely to result in improvement than just spending more time practicing.
  • Authoritative opinion from a 1993 Anders Ericsson paper suggests that although practice focusing on fixing errors may not be the most enjoyable, it is probably the most effective.
  • Research on practice sessions of pianists published in the Journal of Research in Music Education indicates that the best pianists put a stronger focus on immediately fixing errors so they do not occur again.  
Comment: The argument is fairly persuasive because, as presented, it makes good logical sense (logos = logical appeal) and basically validates my personal experiences. The results of the studies on the musicians’ practices made the argument much more credible (ethos = ethical appeal) and convincing to me. In fact, I would have liked hearing about the studies in more detail. I liked the author’s use of the example of learning to play an instrument because I could relate to it (pathos = emotional appeal) and it made the argument more “real” for me. Perhaps, for the same reason, the article might be less interesting and compelling to someone without any formal musical experience.
Guidelines for Reading Analysis Presentations 3 & 4 on The Ethics of What We Eat
Sign-up for one set of chapters for Weeks 9, 10, or 11 and one set of chapters for Weeks 12, 13, or 14. Make a note of the chapter numbers and presentation dates that you sign up for below.
Reading analysis 3 chapters: ________________________  Presentation date: _______________
Reading analysis 4 chapters: ________________________  Presentation date: _______________
You will be presenting your analysis in class along with two to five of your classmates. The class will be counting on you to be on top of the chapters you are covering, so please be prepared!
This assignment is worth 30 points – to receive credit, you must participate in the presentation of your analysis. You will be graded primarily on your written analysis (breakdown of scoring below), but outstanding presentations will be rewarded.
Before you begin your work, examine the sample analysis on the back of this sheet.
Read the chapters you will be analyzing carefully. If possible, read them twice. On your first reading, just try to identify the main idea(s) and get a feel for the writer’s approach and the flow of the piece. On your second reading, go over the text more carefully; notice how the writer constructs his argument. You will probably want to mark up your text and/or take notes.
To prepare your written analysis:
Identify the author’s name and the title of the article. Answer the following questions. Put your answers in outline form (see sample analysis on the reverse side of this sheet).
6.     What is the central claim (or thesis) of the selection? Your answer should be a complete sentence in your own words (not a quote!). Be as specific as possible, but remember that your claim should cover the whole article. (10 points)
7.     Is the central claim expressed explicitly or implicitly? The claim is explicit if the writer spells out what it is. The claim is implicit if the writer only implies the claim but does not state it outright. (1 point)
8.     What reasons link the evidence to the claim? In other words, why does the evidence support the claim? Reasons may be presented explicitly or implied. (7 points)
9.     What evidence does the writer present to support his or her claim? Specify and categorize the evidence (e.g. examples, personal experiences, analogy, authoritative opinion, facts, statistical data, cause-effect reasoning, results of scientific experiments, comparison, interviews, etc. – see sample on back). Do not answer this question with detailed quotes or paraphrases from the article! For additional guidance, see the table of Kinds of Evidence on pp. 91-4 of your textbook Writing Arguments. (7 points)
10.  Comment briefly on the persuasiveness of the article by answering one or more of the following questions.  (5 points)
·      Is the argument convincing? Does it rely on emotional, ethical, and/or logical appeals?
·      Are there flaws in the reasoning of the argument? Does it rely on questionable sources?
·      Does understanding the argument require knowledge of the historical or cultural context in which it was written?
·      How do the style, organization, and/or tone contribute or detract from the persuasiveness of the argument?
·      What is your personal reaction to the article?

SAMPLE ANALYSIS of “The Myth of ‘Practice Makes Perfect’” by Annie Murphy Paul
Central claim: Mastery of a skill demands deliberate practice, focusing on improving weak areas, rather than just spending time repeating the activity (Explicit).
Reason: Improvement at a skill only occurs when the practitioner works to notice and eliminate errors through practice.
Evidence:
  • Authoritative opinion from cognitive psychologist Gary Marcus argues that deliberate practice is much more effective than unfocused just-for-pleasure practice.
  • Marcus cites studies that show that working to improve weaknesses is more likely to result in improvement than just spending more time practicing.
  • Authoritative opinion from a 1993 Anders Ericsson paper suggests that although practice focusing on fixing errors may not be the most enjoyable, it is probably the most effective.
  • Research on practice sessions of pianists published in the Journal of Research in Music Education indicates that the best pianists put a stronger focus on immediately fixing errors so they do not occur again. 

Comment: The argument is fairly persuasive because, as presented, it makes good logical sense (logos = logical appeal) and basically validates my personal experiences. The results of the studies on the musicians’ practices made the argument much more credible (ethos = ethical appeal) and convincing to me. In fact, I would have liked hearing about the studies in more detail. I liked the author’s use of the example of learning to play an instrument because I could relate to it (pathos = emotional appeal) and it made the argument more “real” for me. Perhaps, for the same reason, the article might be less interesting and compelling to someone without any formal musical experience.

Syllabus Eng 100 Fall 2014

English 100 - Freshman Composition
Course Syllabus

Instructor: Tom Amano-Tompkins                                          Term: Fall 2014
Section: 25179 – MW 7:00 pm -8:50 pm                                           Location: LA-213       
Office hours: TBA
Email: tomp99@earthlink.net (best way to communicate with me outside of class!). I can also be reached at tamanotompkins@cerritos.edu
Prerequisite: Satisfactory completion of the English Placement Process or English 52 or equivalent with a grade of “C” or higher.
Course Description:
English 100 stresses the importance of written communication through reading and writing of expository and research essays.  Because this is a course to improve writing skills, you will not only engage extensively in the writing process through prewriting, writing, and revision, but also read extensively in the course textbook.  Furthermore, this particular class is set around the theme of "Identity and the Cultural Experience."  As a result, all readings and writing assignments will be based around this theme.
Upon completion of this course, you will be able to:
  • Employ the writing process in order to understand and complete the writing task
  • Write an essay that has a specific purpose, in response to specific writing prompts and course assignments
  • Write a multi-paragraph essay with specific details, examples, and illustrations to fulfill a purpose
  • Demonstrate critical engagement with outside sources
  • Write in prose style characterized by clarity, complexity, and variety
  • Adhere to the conventions of standard written English in accord with MLA style
Required Texts: (available at the campus bookstore)
Patterns for College Writing: A Rhetorical Reader and Guide by Laurie G. Kirszner and Stephen R. Mandell – ISBN #: 0312676840
The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini – ISBN #: 1-59448-000-1
The Ethics of What We Eat by Peter Singer & Jim Mason – ISBN #: 1-59486-687-6
You will also need to purchase two blue exam books for in-class essays.
Bring your books, a notebook (or notebook paper), and a pen to every class meeting. To complete some assignments, you will need access to the Internet and to a computer word processor.

Students who succeed in English 100 usually choose to:                        **Read carefully!**

  • Make a serious commitment to succeeding in this class.
  • Come to class on time and prepared.
  • Get the required texts as soon as possible.
  • Do all the assignments, including readings, and keep up with the class schedule.
  • Participate in class discussions and activities.
  • Refrain from using their cell phones during class.
  • Let me know immediately if they experience a problem with the class or if other areas of their lives seriously interfere with their ability to do their class work.
  • Seek out all legitimate help with their course work, if they need it, including the Writing Lab, Special Programs & Services, campus librarians, their textbooks, and me.
·      Maintain academic integrity by doing their own work. They do not plagiarize; they do not cheat. (See box on plagiarism on next page.)
  • Treat their classmates and instructor with respect and consideration.
  • Recognize that real learning is difficult – it involves making mistakes and taking risks.
If you are not willing to make these choices, you are not likely to succeed in this class!
I will be happy to meet with you to discuss your work in this course. I encourage you to visit me during office hours, but if that is not convenient for you, we can make an appointment to meet at another time.
Plagiarism can mean copying, word for word, all or part of something someone else has written and turning it in with your name on it. Plagiarism also includes using your own words to express someone else’s ideas without crediting the source of those ideas.
Plagiarism is a very serious form of academic misconduct. It’s both lying and stealing, and it’s a waste of time for students and teachers. College and departmental policy on plagiarism will be strictly enforced: Any student caught plagiarizing will automatically receive a zero for that assignment, with no possibility of making it up, and may be subject to a formal reprimand and/or suspension.
Cite your sources! Please retain all notes and drafts of your papers until grading for the course is completed.

Attendance/Tardiness
Attendance in class is mandatory. This is the college policy. If a student is absent during the add period OR for more than 10% of the total class hours (three classes), the instructor has sufficient cause to drop that student from the class. Arriving late or leaving early will count as one half of an absence.

Grading:
Your final grade in this class will be computed as follows.
Essays (2)                                                      30%                 300 points (150 points each)  
Prewriting/Outlines & Drafts (4)                  2%                 20 (5 points per outline/draft)
Research Paper                                                20%                 200                                   
Workshops (6)                                             3%                  30  (6 workshops, 5 points each)       
Reading Analysis Presentations (5)                 20%                 200 (40 points each)
Midterm (in-class essay)                                   7%                 100                 
Final exam                                                         4%                   40
Quizzes                                                             7%                   70 (25 quizzes, 2-5 points each)
Participation                                                      4%                 _40 points
Total                                                                100%               1000 points

A = 90%   900-1000 points          B = 80%   800-899                             C = 70%   700-799
            D = 60%   600-699                      F = 50%    0-599

English 100 is a UC-CSU transferable course, so rigorous academic standards must be applied to grading your work. All assignments are required. In-class work, such as reading analysis presentations and quizzes, cannot be made up.
Missing assignments can significantly impact your grade and prevent you from passing the course. For example, if you fail to turn in one essay (worth 150 points) and one Reading Analysis Presentation (40 points), you will need to complete every other assignment with an average score of more than 87% in order to pass the class with a C (70%).
No late assignments will be accepted, unless an extension has been arranged with the instructor in advance. Papers may not be submitted by email except by special permission, and when permitted, it is the student’s responsibility to make sure that the paper is received and readable.

Quizzes will be given frequently throughout the term whenever substantial reading is due. Each quiz will consist of two to five multiple-choice questions that the instructor will read out loud. Quizzes will always be given at the beginning of the class session; students who are absent or arrive late may not make up quizzes, even if they have really good excuses.
Reading Analysis Presentation assignments: You are required to present your analysis of one of the assigned readings every few weeks for the duration of the class. There will be a sign-up sheet for each set of readings; in some cases, you may be assigned to analyze a specific reading. You must do your analysis on the reading you signed up for (or were assigned) – you may not switch to another reading without clearing it with your instructor. Your written analysis is due the day we discuss it in class (see Schedule), and you will present your findings to the class during our discussion of the reading. Late reading analyses will not be accepted. Guidelines for the reading analyses will be distributed separately.
Essays (including Research Paper) must be typed and formatted according to MLA (Modern Language Association) guidelines. For guidance, see the MLA Formatting and Style Guide at the Web site of the Purdue Online Writing Lab (http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/ - link available on the course site). Papers may not be submitted by email except by special permission, and when permitted, it is the student’s responsibility to make sure that the paper is received and readable. Late papers will receive an automatic 10% point deduction and will not be accepted later than one week after the original due date. The research paper will not be accepted late!
Turnitin.com: To verify the originality of writing submitted for this class, all essays must be uploaded to Turnitin.com. Turnitin.com will generate an originality report for the instructor identifying any borrowed material in student essays (borrowed material includes correctly documented quotes, as well as plagiarized material). In order to receive full credit, students must upload their essays to Turnitin.com before class on the day the assignment is due. No essay will be graded until it is uploaded to Turnitin.com.
Go to Turnitin.com to create a student profile. Use the following information to upload your essay:
                        Class ID:                                 Enrollment password:




Schedule of Topics, Readings, and Written Assignments (subject to change)

Date

Readings to be completed before class

Quizzes, exams, and major assignments


Week 1


Mon. 8/18

Writing diagnostic
Wed. 8/20
Handout: “The Myth of ‘Practice Makes Perfect’”

Quiz 1
(Reading Analysis 1)

Week 2


Mon. 8/25
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 1 – Reading to Write: Becoming a Critical Reader, pp. 11-27
“The Myth of the Latin Woman: I Just Met a Girl Named Maria” by Judith Ortiz Cofer, pp. 232-237
“Just Walk On By: A Black Man Ponders His Power to Alter Public Space” by Brent Staples, pp. 240-243
Quiz 2
(Reading Analysis 1)
Wed. 8/27
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 2 – Invention, pp. 29-49
Ch. 8 – Exemplification, pp. 211-227
 “Mother Tongue, ” by Amy Tan, pp. 466-71
*** Last day to drop class and get a full refund is Aug. 29
Quiz 3
(Reading Analysis 1)


Week 3


Mon. 9/1
LABOR DAY HOLIDAY – NO CLASS

Wed. 9/3
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 12 – Classification and Division, pp. 435-448

“The Ways We Lie” by Stephanie Ericsson, pp.  474-81

Quiz 4
(Reading Analysis 1)


Week 4


Mon. 9/8
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 3 – Arrangement, pp. 51-64
 Debate: Should American Citizenship be a Birthright? pp. 593-4
“The Case for Birthright Citizenship” by Linda Chavez, pp. 595-597
Quiz 5

(Reading Analysis 2)
Wed. 9/10
Patterns for College Writing:
 “An Argument to Be Made about Immigrant Babies and Citizenship” by George F. Will, pp. 600-602

Prewriting/Outline 1 Workshop
Quiz 6
Prewriting for
Essay 1
(Reading Analysis 2)

Week 5


Mon. 9/15
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 4 – Drafting and Revising, pp. 65-79
“The ‘Black Table’ Is Still There” by Lawrence Otis Graham, pp. 349-351
Quiz 7
(Reading Analysis 2)
Wed. 9/17
Patterns for College Writing:
 “A Peaceful Woman Explains Why She Carries a Gun” by Linda M. Hasselstrom, pp. 354-359

Draft 1 Workshop
Quiz 8
Draft of Essay 1
(Reading Analysis 2)


Week 6


Mon. 9/22

Essay 1 due

Wed. 9/24
Kite Runner:
Chapters 1-6, pp. 1-58
Quiz 9
(Reading Analysis 3)

Week 7


Mon. 9/29
Kite Runner:
Chapters 7-10, pp. 59-124
Quiz 10
(Reading Analysis 3)
Wed. 10/1
Kite Runner:
Chapters 11-13, pp. 125-189
Quiz 11
(Reading Analysis 3)

Week 8


Mon. 10/6
Kite Runner:
Chapters 14-19, pp. 190-242
Quiz 12
(Reading Analysis 3)
Wed. 10/8
Kite Runner:
Chapters 20-23, pp. 243-310

Prewriting/Outline 2 Workshop
Quiz 13

Prewriting for

Essay 2

 (Reading Analysis 3)

Week 9


Mon. 10/13
Kite Runner:
Chapters 24-25, pp. 311-372

Quiz 14
(Reading Analysis 3)
Wed. 10/15

Midterm Exam

Week 10


Mon. 10/20
The Ethics of What We Eat:  Preface, pp. v-viii & Introduction, pp. 3-12

Quiz 15

 

Wed. 10/22
Draft 2 Workshop
Draft of Essay 2


Week 11


Mon. 10/27
The Ethics of What We Eat:
Ch. 1-3, pp. 15-41
Quiz 16
(Reading Analysis 4)
Wed. 10/29
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 16 – Finding and Evaluating Sources, pp. 705-710
LIBRARY ORIENTATION
Quiz 17

Draft of essay 2 due


Week 12


Mon. 11/3
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 14 – Argumentation, pp. 525-533
The Ethics of What We Eat:
Ch. 4-5, pp. 42-80
 Quiz 18


Essay 2 is due

(Reading Analysis 4)


Wed. 11/5
The Ethics of What We Eat:
Ch. 6-8, pp. 83-110

Research Paper Workshop

Quiz 19
(Reading Analysis 4)
Research proposal due

Week 13


Mon. 11/10
The Ethics of What We Eat:
Ch. 9-10, pp. 111-150
Quiz 20
(Reading Analysis 4)
Wed. 11/12
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 14 – Argumentation, pp. 533-550

Research Paper Workshop

Quiz 21
Research paper Works Cited due


Week 14


Mon. 11/17
The Ethics of What We Eat:
Ch. 11-12, pp. 151-183

Research paper works cited due
Quiz 22
(Reading Analysis 5)
Wed.
11/19
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 17 – Integrating Sources and Avoiding Plagiarism, pp. 711-721
Research Paper Workshop
*** Last day to drop classes with a “W” is Nov. 21
Quiz 23
Outline of research due


Week 15


Mon. 11/24
The Ethics of What We Eat:
Ch. 13-15, pp. 187-230

Library Visit


Outline of research paper due

Quiz 24
(Reading Analysis 5)
Wed. 11/26

Research Paper Workshop
Outline of research paper due


Week 16


Mon. 12/1
The Ethics of What We Eat:
Ch. 16-17, pp. 231-269
Ch. 18. pp. 270-284
Quiz 25

(Reading Analysis 5)

Wed. 12/3
Research Paper Workshop
First draft of research paper due

Week 17

Mon. 12/8
Individual conferences on research paper progress

Wed. 12/10
Research Paper Workshop
Review for final exam
Second draft of research paper due

Finals Week

Mon. 12/15
Final Exam 8:00 pm - 10:00 pm
Research paper due